You control my every emotion
with your piece of string
You can make me fly
with beautiful wings
Yet as your mood strikes
without a thought
You pull so tight
and pull at my heart
Your string either steals my air
or fills me full of hope
Like pushing my buttons
My thoughts you provoke
Must we go on in this way
In light, then in dark
Let me be free from
your string on my heart
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Samantha
What a deeply emotional poem - one I could have personally related to a couple of years back.
How are you? Miss our chats on Helium. I must call back some time
This is a thought provoking poem Sammers and it has good flow. I love a poem that rhymes. Is this something you wrote a while ago or one you wrote just now? I ask because this is something I felt a few years ago and I finally left. The string is still there but it is no longer within his reach.
Keith! Thanks for visiting and for your comments on my poem. I'm glad this is a situation you are no longer in.
I miss you too and hope to see more of you in the upcoming days! Take Care!
Wynn,
This is actually something that came about when Rebecca mentioned she was going to write a poem about Heart Strings. The first thing that came to my mind was "your string on my heart". I wrote this in about 10 minutes on Christmas Eve, I believe.
I'm glad your string is no longer within his reach and you were strong and smart enough to put an end to it. Love you chickadee and thanks for visiting and your comments as well!
I really enjoy this piece good work and I would like to see more get going now chop chop lol.
How about being a "Blogger of the World"? I nominate you and your web site for the award, which I proudly accepted from AngelBaby.
Angel has an article on her site about angels and a miracle which I think all should read, but I think you will like. The link is on my site, Gimme A Dream. You can pick up your award and the link at the same time.
How about being a "Blogger of the World"? I nominate you and your web site for the award, which I proudly accepted from AngelBaby.
Angel has an article on her site about angels and a miracle which I think all should read, but I think you will like. The link is on my site, Gimme A Dream. You can pick up your award and the link at the same time.
Once wasn't enough, LOL!
Hey there Silly Sammers just wanted to let you know I have officially tagged you. The whole thing is on my blog so you will need to go there and copy it then paste it here and then tag five more people. It is titled something like from Keiths site lol.
Ever seen some of these before?
"26. But it is so very hard to be an on-your-own-take-care-of-yourself-cause-there-is-no-one-else-to-do-it-for-you grown up.
27. Each of us is ultimately alone.
28. The most important things, each person must do for himself.
29. Love is not enough, but it sure helps."
30. We have only ourselves, and one another. That may not be much,
but that is all there is.
~Sheldon Kopp
In a way, it addresses "who" is holding the string(s). Sometimes it might be your "left" brain, other times your "right"...
Learned Optimism, by M. Seligman
...Effexor XR helps also!
Hey there Sam,
I hope your uncle is feeling better. I know it is going to be a long and tough recovery for him but he is in my thoughts and prayers and ofcourse you and your family are as well. I wanted to also let you know please add me to your friend list on Yuwie. Bye and hope you are doing okay.
Hi Marv,
Nice to meet you. Thanks for your comment. Thanks for those quotes too, so true. I hope to get to know you more in the future.
Jadey,
Thanks sweetie for your thoughts and prayers for my uncle. I've already talked to you via email about yuwie.
Much Love,
Samantha
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